I am afraid to write about love in the present tense. You prefer concrete pictures but these days I tiptoe in metaphor. After all the months of madness, floods of meanness, and whorling anxieties, I needed to remember who I was, who I'd been-- anything with flavor slash taste. I needed to stop shoving everything away, so I went ahead and fell in love. There were no proclamations: no one needed to know because it was only a pause, a balm, a rest stop where cold water flowed from the drinking fountain, where the road noise receded and the cows over yonder lowed. Inside the pause it was forever ... time outdid herself, and I succeeded in my quest to feel again. It wasn’t one night or an afternoon delight. Days swayed into eons, swept up then put up, so that I could feel the truth again. I’ll never say it ended, though it did. Where does the seed of a dandelion on the wind end, and the new flower begin? Inside the pause it was forever.
April 23rd is today! Continuing NaPoWriMo for day 23.
This is poem is from Prompt #3 from this evening’s WWKC (Salt Tooth) writing workshop. The poem Breve Pausa is the inspiration.
Thanks as always to
for leading a terrific workshop.
Wow! Blew me away like a dandelion seed in the wind…