I tried to write a list poem about trash, stuff we paid for, cast off to the road -- who does that? I always wonder. who heaves a mattress into the Grandview Triangle? -- and tires, and patio furniture and hunks of dashboards and and slices of bumpers and holy mufflers and QT cups and Casey's cups some half emtpy, some half full and rear projection TVs and smushed boxes -- I tried to make the list but the list kept wandering to tree limbs and billabongs and seagulls wearing six-pack rings and what happened to all our spoons? and why do we hide our candy wrappers from each other down the couch cushions? and noticed a body covered in blankets under the brush in our subdivision and gaped at the tarp sea in the Victoria park and, stone silent, passing by East Hastings, man's detritus shooting up with government needles-- whatwhat what-- On a windy day a concern: maybe the can falls over and Hot Pocket boxes escape. Maybe unconfined Pampers reveal themselves in the slush. I tried to write a list poem to contain the dross of the wide sargasso sea, aluminum laminated with polypropylene flapping at the back fence, but, it just goes on and on and on
A list poem is a deliberately organized poem containing a list of images or adjectives that build up to describe the poem’s subject matter through an inventory of things. — poets.org
“Stars fading but I linger on, dear …”
(“Dream a Little Dream of Me” is a 1931 song with music by Fabian Andre and Wilbur Schwandt and lyrics by Gus Kahn. A popular standard, it has seen well over 400 recorded versions.)
Painfully thorough but I loved it! Even the structure of the list communicated the frustration and the chaos of our trashing the planet.
Wow! I will dream of only you after that amazing song!!! The poem was great, and the singing blew me away.