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T. Mallie Brathwaite's avatar

This poem is fragmented and foggy not clearly defining the whole, just like a poem about "broken" should be. "Do not unravel old ideas." "Another blind chance." To complete your thought, a provoking question which I might ponder all day in bed under flannel sheets.

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Faith Yanai's avatar

So lovely!

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Jessica Klimesh's avatar

Love this one!

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